(建议信)
英语
写作
2012年考研英语（一）真题小作文
Directions: Some international students are coming to your university. Write them an email in the name of the Students' Union to
- extend your welcome and
- provide some suggestions for their campus life here. You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" instead. Do not write the address. (10 points)
题目分析
这是一封以"学生会"的名义写给即将来到大学的国际学生的建议信。主要目的是表达对国际学生的欢迎，并为他们提供一些关于校园生活的实用建议。
写作思路
第一段
本文是一封以"学生会"的名义写给国际学生的信，因此采用公务信函（问候致意 + 自我介绍 + 表明目的）的框架。出于礼貌，可在信件开头对国际学生的到来致以热烈欢迎。
第二段
需要基于题目，灵活修改以下锦囊妙句，选择其中三句，通过合理的串联，快速构建一篇内容翔实、理由充分的文章。以下是备选锦囊妙句：
锦囊妙句 11
- 你应该遵守相关的规定，确保安全/保持安静，并且不要乱扔垃圾。
You are expected to follow the relevant regulations, ensure your own safety/keep silence, and avoid littering.
在大学期间，你应该遵守相关的规定，确保安全。
==During the university years==, you are expected to follow the relevant regulations and ensure your own safety.
锦囊妙句 12
- 你最好阅读一些关于中国文化的专业书籍并且提前做一个详尽的计划，这样可以帮助你快速度过脆弱的初期。
It's better to read some professional books about ==Chinese culture== and ==create a comprehensive plan in advance==. This can quickly help you navigate the delicate initial phase.
你最好阅读一些关于中国文化的专业书籍并且提前做一个详尽的计划，这样可以帮助你快速度过脆弱的初期。
It's better to read some professional books about ==Chinese culture== and ==create a comprehensive plan in advance==. This can quickly help you navigate the delicate initial phase.
锦囊妙句 13
- 《红楼梦》很有启发性，每次阅读这本书都会有不同的体会。非常适合像你这样的初学者/外国人。
==Dream of the Red Chamber== is very inspiring, and each ==reading== of ==this book== brings different insights. It's highly suitable for beginners/foreigners like you.
《红楼梦》很有启发性，每次阅读这本书都有不同体会，很适合外国人。
==Dream of the Red Chamber== is very inspiring, and each ==reading== of ==this book== brings different insights. It's highly suitable for foreigners like you.
锦囊妙句 18
- 为了保持身体健康，建议你每天坚持运动，并将其变为日常习惯。此外，晚上11点前睡觉可以避免熬夜对身体造成的伤害。
To maintain good health, it is recommended that you engage in daily exercise and make it a part of your daily routine. Additionally, going to bed before 11 PM can help avoid the harm caused by staying up late.
为了保持身体健康，建议你每天坚持运动，并将其变为日常习惯。此外，晚上11点前睡觉可以避免熬夜对身体造成的伤害。
To maintain good health, it is recommended that you engage in daily exercise and make it a part of your daily routine. Additionally, going to bed before 11 PM can help avoid the harm caused by staying up late.
第三段
希望提的建议能够有所帮助。
妙句成文
Dear International Students,
Welcome to our university! I hope this email finds you well. I, on behalf of the Students' Union, am writing this email to ==provide some suggestions for your campus life==.
First and foremost, it's better to read some professional books about ==Chinese culture== and ==create a comprehensive plan in advance==. This can quickly help you navigate the delicate initial phase.【妙句12】What is more, to maintain good health, it is recommended that you engage in daily exercise and make it a part of your daily routine. Additionally, going to bed before 11 PM can help avoid the harm caused by staying up late.【妙句18】Last but not least, ==during the university years==, you are expected to follow the relevant regulations and ensure your own safety.【妙句11】
Hopefully, the suggestions provided will be helpful to you. Wish you all the best.
Yours sincerely, Li Ming
每日一句
The financial crisis has made it more acceptable to be between jobs or to leave a bad one.(2011, Reading Comprehension, Part A Text 2)
词汇
financial crisis: 金融危机
第一步：找谓语
The financial crisis ==has made== it more acceptable to be between jobs or to leave a bad one.
第二步：断句
原句只有一处谓语，因此只包含一件事，无需进行断句，原句结构为：主 + 谓 + 宾 + 宾补；
第三步：简化
- 定冠词：The 与形容词：financial 共同修饰名词：crisis
- 名词：crisis为原句主语
- 动词：has made 为句子谓语部分
- 代词：it 为动词made的形式宾语
- 宾语补足语部分：more acceptable to be between jobs or to leave a bad one.
-副词 more 修饰形容词 acceptable
- 形容词：acceptable 补充说明宾语 it
- 并列结构：to be between jobs or to leave a bad one 这里由并列连词or连接的两处动词不定式组成的并列结构，为句子的真实宾语
- between jobs 这里为习语，可以被译为“失业”或者“职业空窗期”
- 不定冠词 a 修饰代词 one
- 形容词 bad 修饰代词 one
- 代词 one 这里代指 job
去掉拓展成分，就得到了句子的核心：
- …… crisis has made it …… acceptable to be between jobs or to leave …… one. —— …… 危机已经使它……失业或者离开……变的可以接收。
